I've been tagged!
Here's what I have to do . . . .
- Flip open a dictionary and point to a word / get word of the day from dictionary.com
- Type the word into google images.
- Pick an image that strikes you.
- Write a 10 line riff off the image.
- Use the word or the meaning at least once within the first 5 lines.
- Tag 3 other bloggers on your list.
ok, so I opened a latin to english dictionary and this is the word I found.
Sui caedere : suicide : is the act of willfully ending one's own life; it is sometimes a noun for one who has committed or attempted the act.
(Source: http://www.albany.edu/scj/jcjpc/vol6is3/st-matthew-martyr.html)
Here's a verse that I had written almost a decade ago when I was in the 9th grade. I was very sore at my folks for having grounded me and slipped this verse under their bedroom door to scare them a little bit. Yeah, I was a little monster!
Here I lie greeting Death in open arms,
In this profound abyss my misfortune has driven me to
The unreasoning scorn of some mortals
Makes me quit my life that I now loathe.
My voice filled with constant throes is not heard,
They have hounded my soul to death by cruel rigor.
Oh! Dont they see a thousand scars bleeding from my heart?
I clasp my hands and beg for mercy,
But they tie my hands with twisted rope.
"woe is me, victorious thou dost remain"*, I cry
Cant they see how deep the wounds are
That now consume my striken soul?
When one day, they'll hear of my death,
They'll discover that I'm so worthy of their sympathy
*stole this line from the book "Don Quixote" by Miguel de Cervantes.
Now I tag
now you guys get to work ;)
13 Comments:
:-) "scare them a little bit??"
Man, this stuff is deep, dark, scary aite. Can't wait to hear what your parents had to say about it.
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Anonymous, at 3:15 PM
Well, I've tried to pull these stunts so many times that my mom couldn't care less. She totally ignored it - said I should consider writing happy poems that would make for some pleasant reading :)
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chérie, at 7:29 PM
scare them once -- that's wicked !
scare them many times -- such a drama queen ;):)
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Fosix, at 9:05 AM
WHOA that this tag looks fun!
WHOA that you picked suicide!
WHOA that you wrote such a remarkable poem! (I love the last two lines...Who will weep when I die? You, that's who! Hehehehe...)
WHOA that you read me! :)
WHOA that you tagged me!
To sum up, uhh...what's the word I'm looking for...?
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Anonymous, at 10:31 AM
Cherie dear.....that is a dark poem. hope to read some happier ones like your mom said :)
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second_wind, at 12:29 AM
@fosix
Drama queen! Yeah, I try!
@flickering flame
Who will cry when I die? Who will miss me when I am not around? Yeah that's the inevitable question that haunts me all the time . . . My brother keeps telling me that poeple might shed a few tears but life goes on as always . . . So I guess I will miss more of life if I am not around than them missing me . . . I don't know if that is what you meant - that is how I construed it . . . Can't wait to see what you got :) You go girl!
@second wind
Happier ones? You got it! My next post will be a peom I wrote for my mom on Mother's Day when I was in middle school.
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chérie, at 9:33 AM
Lol! Awesome poem Cherie. And knowing you, I'm not at all surprised that you wrote that to scare your folks! :)
And thanks for taking the tag.
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Sin, at 11:46 AM
once i told one of my girlfriends that i can die in peace if she will cry over my grave and she nearly killed me :-)
read your post on favourite songs....have heard every one of them except "See you on the other side" so glad to know, you are a rocker :-)
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zypsy, at 8:12 AM
They say people who commit this dreary act would suffer in this world and the next !
Supposed to be the worst of mortal sins ! Brrrrrrr ....
Well good to know that people do it only to scare someone ..
though when the act is committed the one who is the loser is the one who loses life ..
When we realize that we are so insignificant yet unique and that life goes on within us and without us .... then we surrender to the Force and then everything that comes our way is a treat ... and dealing with 'Agents' is easy - like Neo in the Matrix when he realises. But be prepared to be shot at first !!!!!!!!! :)
My message to all suicide planners is ...
Make yourself available to be shot at .. dont run away .. for this really makes you aware of what you are capable of .... you are alone ... yes ... I know .. and this is what makes you the ONE ... do you see that ???? Wake up ! Be Awake ! Be Aware !
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Anonymous, at 11:33 PM
You did not steal the line from me, you just put it where it makes more sense-its true home.
I also wrote the following line in my book:
"For if he like a madman lived,
At least he like wise old died."
So, even when life churns sanity out of you, remember this - Siempre Sonrie y la fuerza estara contigo!
Keep up the good work! Don't be misled by the messiah character. If somebody's shooting at you, run and hide. Not everyone is blessed with supple vertebrae like Neo.
Adios! (I am going back...kind of overstayed my Halloween break)
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Anonymous, at 10:23 PM
@TF
Hey! I'm glad I was tagged.
@zypsy
You should listen to 'see you on the other side'. I have fallen in love with it! It starts off soft and then picks tempo.
@flickering flame
aaah . . . that's what you meant! Like I said in my last comment - the messiah who also happens to be my bro has spoken - and he believes the contrary.
@messaih and MDC
You guys' thoughts differ so much even though you were both born on the same day!
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chérie, at 1:52 PM
This tag is twin fun with all the comments! My post is ready. :)
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Anonymous, at 5:42 AM
Thanks! :)
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Anonymous, at 8:25 AM
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